Hey There,
So I thought I’d change it up a bit and post a poem of mine I wrote while under the influence of insomnia one night haha. I’m feeling a bit numb right now, I can’t explain it…I’ll just stop talking and let this set my mood.
Feel.
Loss
Fragile
Sorrow
Lethargic
Drugged
Stuck
Confused
Hurt
Lost
Restricted
Obstructed
Isolated
Exhausted
Defeated
Dissatisfied.
The soul is easily daunted by emotions
It succumbs to the heightened awareness of these senses
Feels the outward force of exertion
When faced with tragedy
Its forceful gravity
Emotions in extremities
Daunted by reality
Feared by its inner voice
Idealist by choice
One who invites the force of passion
Enlightened by rebellion
Gravity claims the weightlessness.
Discontent.
The being within the soul is idle
Unable to feel
Faint sensations of numbness
Creep up the arms and into the heart
That which refuses to surrender to the silent noise of destruction
That which screams of opposition.
This Romantic heart
Intuition takes over and all is lost
Within the host of the fading soul
A reincarnation
Lo destruyó
Into thin air
Lost on its way to another conscience
Lost in translation
Gone is the ability to direct the soul into the realistic world
La pelea
Into the able bodied
Incapable of facing truth.
Utterly alone. Falling. Still now.
The first stanza got stronger and deeper, and so did the last stanza.
Great to write poems under insomnia.
Because I sleep well and deep these days, I no longer do this!
Thank you. For me, writing is at its best during sleepless nights, no doubt
Nice poem you little insomniac!
I feel like I could add you on Facebook all over again lol
found your site on del.icio.us today and really liked it.. i bookmarked it and will be back to check it out some more later
Thank you!